IELTS Writing Test Preparation - Writing Task 2
Nowadays, many children experience unhealthy lifestyles as the increasing of technologies are massively developing in continue to satiate their satisfaction. The technology provides many attractive game options that allure their attention, so, in consequence, the children are easily attached to them, mostly wasting time only by doing this monotone activity. If they are doing this continually without being able to stop, this inevitably would impact their daily habits. Their scheduled activities would be distracted, which directly impacts their unproductivity in managing time to study, play, and other things. Because of that, I do agree and believe that the responsibility of parents is important for taking this trend down significantly, in order to decrease the number of children with this condition. Parents crucially contribute to being role models for their kids by teaching and controlling their activities at home. Additionally, the parents also should apply the rules they have mad